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***COULDNT FINISH THE FINAL, PLEASE ENJOY THE STORY***

INT. CAR - EVENING
LAURA, early 30’s, is in the car with her boyfriend, JUSTIN, early 30’s. Justin puts his hand on top of Laura’s hand. We catch a glimpse of her engagement ring. Laura gives a tiny grin back at Justin. She turns away and looks out the car window in sadness.
We ZOOM INTO Laura’s mind. Laura is running on a grey pathway. She notices a door slightly open with rays of light beaming behind it. She slowly pushes the door open. She sees herself giving Justin the ring back and walking away. She gets so happy. She leans forward as if she is going to walk through the door but rocks crumble down beneath her. The rocks fall into the unknown. Laura gets scared. She steps back and quickly shuts the door.
FADE TO:
INT. CAR - EVENING
Laura is in the car once again. The two drive away into the night.
CUT TO:
INT. MIDDLE SCHOOL CLASSROOM - DAY
Laura is sitting in her teacher’s desk grading tests while her classroom is being reckless. She writes a big ‘F’ on top of the test. She sits there miserable, a spit ball lands directly on her forehead.
CUT TO:
We ZOOM INTO Laura’s mind. Laura is running on the same grey pathway. The door appears once again with rays of light beaming behind it. She opens the door with a bit more confidence. She sees herself giving her boss sliding a resignation letter across his desk. She leans forward as if she is going to walk through but MORE rocks crumble down beneath her scaring her off terrified and slams the door behind her and runs back.
FADE TO:
FADE IN:
INT. MIDDLE SCHOOL CLASSROOM - DAY
Laura is back sitting at her desk. The spitball that was stuck on her head falls off her forehead and she blows it away.
CUT TO:
INT. LAURA’S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Laura is sitting on her bed with her pet cat reading her mail. Her bedroom is filled with movie posters and a California sign in the background. As she opens her mail she reads a letter from the landlord reading
“Dear Laura, This letter is to inform you that your lease will be ending on 6/30.”
Laura releases a sigh and lays flat on her bed.
We ZOOM INTO Laura’s mind. Laura is running on the same grey pathway. The door appears once again with rays of light beaming behind it. She pushes the door wide open. She sees herself in her car filled with boxes. Her little cat is in the passenger seat. Laura points at the Welcome to California sign. She gets closer to the edge once again. More and more rocks crumble down but this time she is determined to walk through. She takes a leap and falls all the way down to nothingness. She screams and panics trying to find something to hold on to. She finally lands on a golden net. She releases a sigh of relief.
The End.
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LEAP, and the net will appear

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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