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Jason (1 like, 1 helpful)

Wow, the story even tied together at the end, I really enjoyed that. When the kid was on the ground and was being picked up, with that representation it definitely brought back memories of one of my accidents, where I could feel what was happening but my eyes were closed and it felt like a dream, great representation and the pace, music, voice acting, all that really showed your teams efforts. Congratulations.

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Aug 23, 2022, 7:00 PM

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Michael

Thank you so much! I appreciate your comment about your accident. I'm glad it connected with you.

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Aug 23, 2022, 8:31 PM

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Michael

I forgot to add credits:
Grandma and Jon: Jenny Kozoroz
Jake: Jon Snyder
JJ and Michael: Michael Kozoroz
Music: Jared Snyder

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Aug 23, 2022, 3:59 AM

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karen (1 like)

I like the drawings, very visual. The narration is magnificent! The storytelling is also great. What a unique storyboard. Overall, great job!

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Aug 22, 2022, 10:31 PM

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Alaa (1 like)

i can relate to this story so much! thank you for the great idea :))

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Aug 22, 2022, 12:31 PM

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Monica (1 like)

Amazing Job! I have no tips! I loved everything about your story! An amazing job!

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Aug 22, 2022, 9:59 AM

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Michael (1 like, 1 helpful)

Fantastic! Need to add titles for who's body you leaped in and make the audio higher or lower for the kid's voices. Keep up the good work!

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Aug 22, 2022, 2:04 AM

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Sophia (1 like, 1 helpful)

Such a cool concept!! I am so impressed you took a risk making it VR!! I think the music and dialogue was super effective in telling the story & your art is really good! I love the idea of switching bodies I guess I just wish I had a little more consistent time in each character so that I could really allign with their emotions! I guess thats the restrictions of short films/storyreels. Well done for taking a risk you've done a great job!

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Aug 21, 2022, 10:37 PM

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David (1 like, 1 helpful)

You did a great job helping me understand what other people are going through by walking a mile in their shoes. This creates deep understanding and empathy for others which leads to solutions to the challenges in life. I like how you use the concept of VR as a way to help us understand this.

While I really love your story, your creativity / innovation, and the moral of your story, I was a bit lost following all the different names and keeping up with who is who as we transition from body to body. The ending is a bit confusing as well.

Overall, very nice and powerful story.

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Aug 21, 2022, 5:34 AM

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Michael (1 like, 1 helpful)

Thank you so much for the feedback David. I think I would actually add names when you leap in someone else’s body as you will see in movies or shows showing the title to the next chapter.

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Aug 21, 2022, 6:44 PM

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This is a story about experiencing other people's stories and understanding them, by walking in their shoes.

Credits:
Grandma and Jon: Jenny Kozoroz
Jake: Jon Snyder
JJ and Michael: Michael Kozoroz
Music: Jared Snyder

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