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Kye (1 like)

I'm just going to get this out of the way because you've heard it a lot, but your pacing was a little fast with the subtitles. Other than that though... it was AMAZING!! This would make for a great short film, because of your story, music choice, and how people can connect to the characters.

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Aug 23, 2022, 3:15 AM

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SOPHIA (1 like)

I only say, the subtitle are very fast, that is so hard for the persons don't use the english, but the story is very interesting, you have a good job. :D

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Aug 23, 2022, 12:38 AM

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Crisol (1 like)

I think your music selection was wonderful! I had some trouble only during some scenes as the pacing was a little too quick. But I like that your art work characters were very expressive.

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Aug 22, 2022, 5:04 AM

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Stephanie (1 like)

I am so happy to see this come to week 8. Your selection in music was PERFECT!. I enjoyed everything about you story. The music, Cupid's cheeky-ness, and the overall moral. Self love is one of the hardest lessons to learn and I am glad the Cupid realized it in you short. Congrats again to making it this far!

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Aug 21, 2022, 10:57 PM

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Alisa (1 like)

I loved this story!! the imigaes were nice and the music only added to it!
The only thing i would change a little was the pacing, some frames where too short and especially the subtitles were hard to read sometimes becuase they vanished so quickly! but overall, i loved the irony of the God of Love not being able to find love himself, great set up!

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Aug 21, 2022, 11:57 AM

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Paige (1 like)

Okay first of all your opening transitions were absolutely stunning! I think show great balance of todays dating trends and meet up’s, I mean Zeus popping up at coffee?! I think this story is so playful, and you’ve done a beautiful job providing a character who thinks he’s got it all, but gets in his own way to where we as the audience want to see him win. Fun character designs, and great movement of the story. Congratulations for making it to the final stretch, and good luck with the rest of your creative journey!
Paige

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Aug 21, 2022, 3:57 AM

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Terry (1 like)

Very cool story! :) It's going a bit fast in terms of editing/pacing, which makes it a bit more difficult to follow. I like your art a lot, it's full of personality enough to forget it's not more than lines.

Cupid's smile at 0:23 is amazing, and his sadness afterwards is tangible.
Interesting choice to go from "Cupid's the only one without love" to how he came to be Cupid!
Cool music choice for when he's going to the humans!
I'm not entirely certain if I understand his list correctly. He's not looking for someone on that list, right? Is he, while working on connecting the humans on his list, looking around for someone himself - and is he apparently alone within the realm of gods? but how come he's alone there, then, if it's not related to his job? These small questions can grow
Amazing shot round 1:20 that he's sounding all hopeless and at the same time telling someone to go away, even more-so followed by "I'm the pretty one but that's okay"
Wait, so he doesn't have humans on his list? hm. I'm almost confused about the details of his job, but it doesn't stop the story.
The interaction with Zeus is very cool, his advice is nice and points to what Cupid has been doing wrong. I'm almost surprised Cupid takes the advice so easily (and I'm wondering if and how he might struggle with it). I guess it makes sense, when Zeus understands Cupid that well.

This story is really wholesome, and a lot of people could learn a lot of (self)love from it :)

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Aug 20, 2022, 7:39 PM

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Autumn

Thank you lots for your feedback!!
I appreciate the critique and i totally get how some parts were a tad confusing.
Also!
For the part where he mentions not having the humans on a list, it more so meant he had never seen those specific humans he went on dates with before because they’ve never been on his “match list”
Anyhow!
Thanks again!

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Aug 21, 2022, 12:20 AM

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Terry (1 like)

That makes sense now!
Glad to think along :)

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Aug 21, 2022, 7:47 AM

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My final storyboard for my original concept of cupid!
A lot of things have changed like me adding characters and taking away certain dialogues
fun fact! cupid was going to be A LOT more cynical than he is now haha

anyways, please enjoy!
I do wish I could have gotten voice acting but I hope the music I chose works in place of that.

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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